I received the feedback last
time to look more into what type of machine would best fit into people’s lives.
Before, I was mainly targeting gyms to purchase my machine and didn’t include the
subscription-based fitness instructors into my business model. Now my machine
is framed as a replacement for the gym and includes subscription fitness classes.
I also decided to make the treadmill’s track out of recycled plastic to make it
more environmentally friendly.
Good evening Ana, I hope all is well and that you are enjoying this rainy weekend! I’m glad that you took the feedback that you received from your first elevator pitch into consideration. Having an outside perspective on things sometimes can really elevate your ideas and allow them to truly develop. Making the treadmill’s track out of recycled plastic sounds really invitational!
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ReplyDeleteHey Ana,
Good job on implementing the feedback into your second pitch. I liked how you have the additional subscription service to give consumers more options. The only suggestion I have is to have more inflection in your voice to keep the audience more engaged. Another aspect of your fitness machine that I liked is how it is made out of plastic, so it is easier on people's joints and environmentally friendly. I think this aspect will attract many consumers. Good job.