https://youtu.be/5LIhU2B3jxA
The feedback I received from the first pitch was to work on the delivery of my pitch and use more voice inflections to keep the audience engaged. I was told that the content of my pitch was good and that I had some good ideas. For this pitch, I worked on using more hand gestures and voice inflections.
Good evening Sarah! I hope you are enjoying the weather out and you are having a great weekend! Your elevator pitch was truly engaging, and I do in fact like the way that you balanced the tempo in your voice at times to reflect on that. Overall, your pitch is very strong, and I like where your business model is headed. Keep up the great work!
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